{"id":310,"date":"2017-09-04T15:38:52","date_gmt":"2017-09-04T19:38:52","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.dremadeoraich.com\/dremadeoraich\/?p=310"},"modified":"2017-09-04T15:38:52","modified_gmt":"2017-09-04T19:38:52","slug":"learning-by-doing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.dremadeoraich.com\/index.php\/2017\/09\/04\/learning-by-doing\/","title":{"rendered":"Learning by Doing"},"content":{"rendered":"<body><p>Most targets for our submissions, whether they be online zines, print magazines or book\/novel publishers, do not offer any sort of feedback when they send rejections. I understand why. With so many queries and submissions, and slush piles that may sometimes seem to rival Mt. Everest, there isn\u2019t enough time for staffers to send personal feedback to each and every would-be contributor or author. It makes sense, but it\u2019s so frustrating to not know where I\u2019m failing! It feels like doing your best through a whole year of school, then finding out you failed but not knowing why or which subject shot you down; or maybe it compares to taking a trip somewhere without a detailed map, then getting lost and not knowing how to get back on course. Without any specific guidance, how are we supposed to improve our craft?<\/p>\n<p>I attended a science fiction workshop at <a href=\"http:\/\/the-muse.org\/\">The Muse Center<\/a> (in Norfolk, Virginia) a few days back and came away excited, motivated and inspired. (Thanks, Jason, Matt and John!) I also came away with some new resources, which I\u2019ll be adding to my links page soon.<\/p>\n<p>One of those new potential targets was <a href=\"http:\/\/magazine.metaphorosis.com\/\">Metaphorosis<\/a>, an online magazine for short fiction. I\u2019ve read some of the entries on the site; they\u2019re good. The zine pays, but the best part of its submission system is this: the editorial staff offers feedback if you ask for it.<\/p>\n<p>I asked. And I learned.<\/p>\n<p>The editor, B. Morris Allen, rejected my story, but at least I know <u>why<\/u>. First of all, my story\u2019s concept was familiar enough they could predict (accurately, I might add) the ending. Morris suggested if I\u2019m going to use a familiar concept, I have to do something <em>new<\/em> with it. Okay. I can deal with that. Second, Morris (and\/or his team) rated my prose for that tale 3 out of 5, which basically means my prose was functional, but not exceptional. Could use some work. No problem. Now that I know where my weaknesses are, I can work toward improvement. In fact, the <a href=\"http:\/\/hamptonroadswriters.org\/2017conference.php\">Hampton Roads Writers Conference<\/a> (coming up later this month) offers several breakout sessions for improving prose. I\u2019ll be attending as many as I can.<\/p>\n<p>The \u201coverly familiar concept\u201d thing is something I\u2019ll have to figure out. I stopped reading altogether for a long time, because I figured that if I was reading, I couldn\u2019t be writing, and I wanted to spend ALL my \u201cextra\u201d time writing. Wrong. Erroneous thinking, and this is an excellent example as to why. If I\u2019m not reading, I don\u2019t know what other story concepts have been done. I thought the concept for \u201cSwitch\u201d was clever. Shows what I know, and the only way to fix that knowledge gap is to fill it. By reading. And reading. And then reading some more.<\/p>\n<p>As you know, I\u2019ve been posting a book review every single week for a while now and while that alone shows I\u2019m reading, it\u2019s also keeping me so busy with novels and other full-length books that my new issues of <a href=\"http:\/\/www.analogsf.com\/\"><em>Analog<\/em><\/a> have been languishing. Bobby suggested I might review short stories, or particular issues of magazines. This makes sense, and I\u2019ll probably start doing that as soon as I finish reviewing the Jemisin series I started last week (and continue this week). I\u2019ve read many online stories, trying to get a feel for what various target magazines want, so there\u2019s a lot of material to be had.<\/p>\n<p>In the meantime, I\u2019ll be sending Metaphorosis something else to read over. Maybe they\u2019ll offer more input I can use. You should check them out \u2013 and if you like what you see, support them through Patreon. Zines like that one are good to keep around.<\/p>\n<\/body>","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Most targets for our submissions, whether they be online zines, print magazines or book\/novel publishers, do not offer any sort of feedback when they send rejections. I understand why. With so many queries and submissions, and slush piles that may sometimes seem to rival Mt. 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