{"id":397,"date":"2017-10-02T20:51:34","date_gmt":"2017-10-03T00:51:34","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.dremadeoraich.com\/dremadeoraich\/?p=397"},"modified":"2017-10-02T20:51:34","modified_gmt":"2017-10-03T00:51:34","slug":"write-right","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.dremadeoraich.com\/index.php\/2017\/10\/02\/write-right\/","title":{"rendered":"Write. Right?"},"content":{"rendered":"<body><p>I signed up for another 6-session fiction class, where students write and submit, then critique each other\u2019s work. I\u2019m excited, but I\u2019m also nervous, as I am anytime I share my stories with someone else.<\/p>\n<p>(That\u2019s crazy talk, you say; don\u2019t you want to get published? Won\u2019t that mean others are reading your words all the time? Yes, but that\u2019s not the same. Readers in a library or gym or living room half a state away\u2014or half a country or half a world\u2014won\u2019t sit across the table from me while they poke holes in my plots. Yes, I\u2019m sure I\u2019ll be critiqued by anyone who ever reads my stories; but a small, intimate classroom setting hits closer to home. It\u2019s a small difference, but compelling nonetheless. I wonder if I\u2019m in good company?)<\/p>\n<p>I do know, though, that the critique process builds better writing. This will make my second 6-session fiction class. Last time the workshop was facilitated by <a href=\"http:\/\/www.lrgiles.com\/\">Lamar Giles<\/a>. This time, our fearless leader is <a href=\"http:\/\/lydianetzer.blogspot.com\/\">Lydia Netzer<\/a>. Both Lamar and Lydia are published authors, so as a student I know I can learn from their experience.<\/p>\n<p>To tell the truth, I\u2019ve been in a writing slump. Oh I have lots of ideas. They just never seem to go anywhere. I keep noting them in my little book of ideas. Meanwhile, I\u2019ve gone back to my novel series, which has been languishing for months while I worked on short stories.<\/p>\n<p>This weekend, I took the time to fill in most of the gaps in my plan for book 3 (book 2 was already plotted and outlined). It looks so wonderful to see all those little colored stickies up on my board, each one a brief note of my intent for that scene. Together they form a sort of road map that will lead my plot through all the essential points up to the crisis and denouement. They give me a target toward which I can aim the arrows of my words.<\/p>\n<p>Even so, some days are a struggle. I\u2019m tired. I\u2019m brain-fried from my day job. I can\u2019t think of a single elegant thing to say. The words I put in my characters\u2019 mouths are stilted, spoken in the wrong voice. On those days, I might write 500 words in three hours, all of which must be rewritten the next day. I must admit, I\u2019ve begun to shy away from the computer on those days. Maybe that\u2019s a mistake. Maybe that\u2019s the source of this slump. \u2018Coz writing is hard, y\u2019all. It\u2019s tempting, when I\u2019m tired, to make excuses as to why I shouldn\u2019t even try.<\/p>\n<p>Bobby enticed me outdoors for a few hours earlier today, which I needed, but it was harder to come back to the blank page than I wanted it to be. I did it, though. I wrote almost a thousand words in book 2 (even if I do have to rewrite them later \u2013 who cares?), then I switched over to this blog post so I could try (TRY) to describe how I feel when it\u2019s a struggle. If you write, you already know. If you don\u2019t, these words probably won\u2019t suffice. Still, it\u2019s worth the effort. It\u2019s good practice. So here I am, at my computer, even though I\u2019m blah.<\/p>\n<p>Right. Onward. Butt in Chair, Hands on Keyboard, Typing Away Madly \u2013 otherwise known as BIC HOC TAM. (Borrowed from Brad Parks, and a darned common slogan for writers online, apparently.)<\/p>\n<p>Doesn\u2019t matter if it\u2019s perfect. Just write, Drema.<\/p>\n<p>Just write.<\/p>\n<\/body>","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I signed up for another 6-session fiction class, where students write and submit, then critique each other\u2019s work. I\u2019m excited, but I\u2019m also nervous, as I am anytime I share my stories with someone else. (That\u2019s crazy talk, you say; don\u2019t you want to get published? Won\u2019t that mean others are reading your words all&#8230;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"om_disable_all_campaigns":false,"_monsterinsights_skip_tracking":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_active":false,"_monsterinsights_sitenote_note":"","_monsterinsights_sitenote_category":0,"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2}},"categories":[3],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-397","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-blog-posts"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_shortlink":"https:\/\/wp.me\/p8n0kX-6p","jetpack-related-posts":[{"id":441,"url":"https:\/\/www.dremadeoraich.com\/index.php\/2017\/11\/06\/critical-mass\/","url_meta":{"origin":397,"position":0},"title":"Critical Mass","author":"DremaDeoraich","date":"November 6, 2017","format":false,"excerpt":"I wrote about critiquing once before (Like Minds and Other Sounding Boards, May 22, 2017), and said at the time that it is hard to sit and listen to people critique your baby, the words you\u2019ve sweat and bled over. 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Both were excellent, and\u2026","rel":"","context":"In &quot;Blog Posts&quot;","block_context":{"text":"Blog Posts","link":"https:\/\/www.dremadeoraich.com\/index.php\/category\/blog-posts\/"},"img":{"alt_text":"","src":"","width":0,"height":0},"classes":[]},{"id":1039,"url":"https:\/\/www.dremadeoraich.com\/index.php\/2018\/09\/10\/empower-your-skill-online-community-with-big-heart\/","url_meta":{"origin":397,"position":3},"title":"Empower Your Skill: Online Community with Big Heart","author":"DremaDeoraich","date":"September 10, 2018","format":false,"excerpt":"Looking for a critique group, but can\u2019t find one in your area? Try Critters Workshop. I found them online several years ago and became enamored of the concept. 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